I have thunder in my eyes
And chaos walks with me at every step see
I am a broken storm
Lighting bolts in my sole
Mystery in my words
Wear suspense in my lips
I tango with trouble
Natural Disaster is my middle name
I am a sonnet written in heavy metallic music in the heart of Opera
Strong shot of whiskey mixed with hurricane and honey
The way I walk with high heels is a protest
Which you can’t handle
ยฉG. V Raghavasree
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Wow. Really good
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Thankyou dear. Glad you like it. Appreciate your time to read my work.
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You are very welcome
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Have a great day dearโบ
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Thankyou. You too ๐
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Such profound words. Indeed a fiery tale in a lovely poem๐๐
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Thankyou for your kind words. Glad you liked it. Have a great day โบ
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This is amazing….very good writing style ๐
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Thankyou glad you liked it ๐
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LOVES THIS
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Thankyou dear. Glad you liked it โบ
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Did you mean to write heals rather than heels?
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Yes dear. Sorry my auto correct . Thankyou for noticing and pointing that out.
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you are so welcome, I tried to think of a double meaning but couldn’t so I thought maybe this was auto correct – your poems are strong and full of depth, thanks.
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thankyou so much. This really means a lot to me. You made my day. It’s hard to find someone who tentatively reads my work.
Hope you have a great day dearโ๐
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EXCELLS IN ANALOGY AND METAPHOR A HARD-HITTING, ROCKING POEM! WOMEN’S EMPOWERMENT, INDEED!
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Lost for words. Thank you so much. Means a lot that a year old post is still views and comments ๐๐๐
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HAPPENS TO ME, ALSO! ๐
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Great. Have a lovely day๐
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DID FOR SURE, ๐
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Glad that you did ๐
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YUPPERS!
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