Tough Cookie

I have thunder in my eyes

And chaos walks with me at every step see

I am a broken storm

Lighting bolts in my sole

Mystery in my words

Wear suspense in my lips

I tango with trouble

Natural Disaster is my middle name

I am a sonnet written in heavy metallic music in the heart of Opera

Strong shot of whiskey mixed with hurricane and honey

The way I walk with high heels is a protest

Which you can’t handle

Β©G. V Raghavasree


Love a feedback on what you thought

Bad or good both welcome πŸ˜‰

23 Comments Add yours

  1. blindzanygirl says:

    Wow. Really good

    Liked by 1 person

    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou dear. Glad you like it. Appreciate your time to read my work.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. blindzanygirl says:

        You are very welcome

        Liked by 1 person

        1. dessertflower5 says:

          Have a great day dear☺

          Liked by 1 person

          1. blindzanygirl says:

            Thankyou. You too 😊

            Liked by 1 person

  2. Samyak Singh says:

    Such profound words. Indeed a fiery tale in a lovely poemπŸ’™πŸ’™

    Liked by 2 people

    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou for your kind words. Glad you liked it. Have a great day ☺

      Liked by 1 person

  3. Nimish says:

    This is amazing….very good writing style πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou glad you liked it 😊

      Like

    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou dear. Glad you liked it ☺

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Did you mean to write heals rather than heels?

        Liked by 1 person

        1. dessertflower5 says:

          Yes dear. Sorry my auto correct . Thankyou for noticing and pointing that out.

          Liked by 1 person

          1. you are so welcome, I tried to think of a double meaning but couldn’t so I thought maybe this was auto correct – your poems are strong and full of depth, thanks.

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            1. dessertflower5 says:

              thankyou so much. This really means a lot to me. You made my day. It’s hard to find someone who tentatively reads my work.

              Hope you have a great day dearβœŒπŸ’ž

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  4. Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    EXCELLS IN ANALOGY AND METAPHOR A HARD-HITTING, ROCKING POEM! WOMEN’S EMPOWERMENT, INDEED!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Lost for words. Thank you so much. Means a lot that a year old post is still views and comments πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

      Liked by 1 person

      1. HAPPENS TO ME, ALSO! πŸ˜€

        Liked by 1 person

        1. Great. Have a lovely day😊

          Liked by 1 person

          1. DID FOR SURE, πŸ˜€

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            1. Glad that you did πŸ™ƒ

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