Rape victim

Rose are red ,violets are blue, my middle finger salutes you for taking advantage of my kindness as a weakness and for ever underestimating my every move.

I can’t wait for the day when karma screws you over. It’s about time I take matters into my own hands and turn tables.

I crave for distruction the same way you destroyed my hopes and dreams. Not a penny more nor less.

The thought of forgiving you burns my skin and curdles my blood. My tears vaporize to larva, burning for revenge.

That day I begged you to leave me alone but you were blinded by your desires. You will always be indebted to my innocence which can never be paid. You have traumatized me for life.

You tore my clothes and saw the parts of me that were sacred. Blood streaming from my forehead, my body painted in blood clots of black and blue. My body aching like hell but you still went for a another round as I lay dead on the stone cold ground .

When you were done you ran like a coward and left me to suffer of to the images running through my head even till this date.

The day you raped me is the day you were born as a beast and died as a human.I don’t want my citizens taxes to pay for your prison. You should not have a such a easy death but you should beg for your death. If I could have the right to punish you. I would lock up in in a tiny cage, naked to the bone, with only your head popping out with your own excreta suffocating you. I want you to be starved and experimented on for every scientific research possible. Your body will be of some use and can prevent animal cruelty at least to some extent.

This should be the justice to every rape victim….

The old saying goes ” sugar is sweet that never be paid. But revenge is sweeter”


I have written this in from the aspect of a rape victim. Her pain and anger through my words.

The punishment which I have written should be only applicable when the rapist is proved medically.

A rape victim suffers her entire life traumatized . She can only move on with life with great difficulty and the pain of the burden she has carry.

Β©G.V Raghavasree


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18 Comments Add yours

  1. Nimish says:

    The punishment which I have written should be only applicable when the rapeist is proved medically…..
    ONE HUNDRED PERCENT AGREE ….

    IT IS NOT EASY TO WRITE SUCH THINGS…EVERY LINE OF YOUR POETRY …..I IMAGINED… I FELT …

    When you were done you ran like a coward and left me to suffer of to the images running through my head even till this date…. πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™

    I WON’T SAY THIS IS GOOD PIECE OF WRITING….IT IS VOICE OF BILLIONS OF GIRLS …FATHER’S…BROTHERS

    πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ THANKS FOR WRITING THIS FRIEND…RESPECT

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou so much. It means a lot. I am glad that you felt the emotions in this blog

      I am glad that I could become a voice of the silent cries of millions out there. There pain that they carry for the rest of there life’s is unbearable.

      It’s my pleasure. And thankyou for reading my work. You made my day😊😊

      Have a great day ahead ✌🌸

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  2. Powerful imagery! I will be reblogging this later if thats ok with you….

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou so much. It means a lot to me. Glad you liked it .
      Sure you can reblog it. Your message made my day✌😊🌸

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      1. You’re very welcome 😊

        Thanks! Awww… I’m glad πŸ™‚

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        1. dessertflower5 says:

          😊

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  3. Reblogged this on Something to Stu Over and commented:
    WARNING! This post could be a trigger for some. It may offend some! It may bring flashbacks! But I feel the need to share this post.

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Oh. It’s fine. I hope it helps others. Thankyou ✌

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  4. This was very intense and broke my heart deeply. Wow. Can’t even imagine what each victim goes through, but there is a God who is alive. The one and true living God Jesus Christ and He is a just judge that hates sin. And He will repay the culprits of such wickedness if they refuse to repent and come to Him. For He is full of mercy and compassion and doesn’t wants none to perish. I will lift up my sister in prayer as long as with the culprit. God bless & keep you in Jesus name. Blessings. πŸ™‚

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou dear. I know it we can never imagine the lives of rape victims. Thankyou for your kind words. It really brightened up my day

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      1. You’re most welcome! ❀ yep, indeed. All praise to God that flows through my mouth with His Words. πŸ™‚

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        1. dessertflower5 says:

          Awww sooo sweet. You have brightened up my day.
          God bless you dear. Have a great day ahead

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          1. Bless God ❀ love you! πŸ™‚ Awww bless God for that! Thank you much, I will in Jesus name!

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            1. dessertflower5 says:

              😊😊

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  5. Thank you for writing this. These are the feelings that I feel and it’s amazing to see them put together so beautifully angry. Thank you πŸ™‚

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      I am sorry dear that you had a horrible past. You are a true survivor. May God bless you. Thankyou for your kind words and coming from you means a lot.
      Hope you have a wonderful dayπŸ˜‡βœŒπŸ’žπŸ’ž

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      1. It’s only horrible if you make it into something you can’t grow from πŸ™‚ thank you!!!

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        1. dessertflower5 says:

          I understand dear. You are stronger than you think. My pleasure. Have a great day βœŒπŸ‘πŸ’ž

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