Lost Island

Little do you know
That I am a lost island
Abandoned to my own insecurities
Surrounded by ocean of failures

Every tide brings with it
A unhealed wound
Memory of the past
That burnt my happiness away

Only these drumming thoughts
Navigate my mind
Of what I could have been
For now a hopeless looser remains

A living museum
Recollecting the souvenirs of your thoughts
Even the death of night dare stop me

Those words that were uttered
The laughter that was shared
Kiss that grinded our bodies
Sold to the name of other lover

These tides may come and go
But why can’t I move on
Waiting for another day
But that took youth away

Death that brought peace
To the agony that I suffered
Mended a broken heart
Into ashes of the flame

As love is what I craved for
But you stole it away
Along with what I am
Locked with your name
This rumour will burn…


Β© G.V Raghavasree

17 Comments Add yours

    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou for dropping byπŸ˜‡βœŒ

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      1. Arooba says:

        my pleasure πŸ™‚

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  1. Nathi says:

    It was a heartbreaking read….

    Liked by 1 person

    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Some emotions are I guess.. thankyou for your time reading it.βœŒπŸ™‚

      Liked by 1 person

  2. kevinkaz4 says:

    This is very deep and gorgeous! Thank you for this piece!! ❀️

    Liked by 1 person

    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Hi there, after a long time. Thankyou so much for your kind words. Glad it touched you.

      Hope you have a great day ☺

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      1. kevinkaz4 says:

        Thank you so much! Enjoy! 😁❀️

        Liked by 1 person

        1. dessertflower5 says:

          Hahahha the pleasure is all mine. Hope you are staying safe✌

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  3. Oh! this is so poignant – loved the deep longings –

    Liked by 1 person

    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou so much.πŸ˜‡

      Liked by 1 person

      1. My absolute pleasure

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  4. An exhilarating and exceptionally written piece!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Much appreciate your kind words. πŸ˜‡

      Liked by 1 person

      1. You’re sincerely welcome!

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  5. Geri Lawhon says:

    Such a sad but wonderfully written piece on heartbreak. Thank you for posting it.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou so much for taking time to read it. 😊✌

      Liked by 1 person

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