I wish one day I could great death with arms wide open like a old lost friend. Happily ready to forfeit the existence to life to a memory in hearts of loved ones as I will be trapped in framed black and white pictures.
Escape this dimension of reality to dust, as my sole flies away from resposablities that can’t tie me down no more. How trilling to end one adventure in a blink of a eye and be storyless cold dead body the very next minute. Be nothing but a rotting corpse locked in a coffin of time.
How I wonder a body filled with warmth, life ,emotions and personality be nothing but emotionless piece of meat held together by bones waiting to depart from it all. The days bleed and nights howls as I see my friends one after the other become a prey to circle of life.
The soup of death thoughts rattle the most vivid past in the roads of tears, shocks and laughters. All my life I have been walking in darkness and let’s see if there is a light at the end of the tunnel…I lay wide awake until death takes my sole as my heart beat slowly fades away with age… little did I die daily succumbing to pleasures to this god dame life as the universal truths reveals itself…
Β© G V Raghavasree
You have reached deep down inside the depths of dying and death. Is all our time on earth spent in vain? When we look at photos of our ancestors and wonder what kind of life did they have, were they able to take it with them beyond the grave? What exactly is our purpose here among the living; what is our purpose among the dead? This is a very perplexing piece, exceptionally well written.
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Thankyou so much for your considerate words. Yes I guess I am making most of my free time. Overthinking does play well in blogging. Death is a concept we are unsure of and scared of. No one talks about it. I thought why not write it down. Hope you have a great day ahead. πΈβ
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ππkeep it up girl
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Thankyou so much Ranjith
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SCARY TOPIC,BUT U MADE IT GREAT…………….NICE JI
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Hahahha thankyou so much man. Means a lot Raju jiβπΈπ
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Damn. You are an exceptional writer. I could feel your words in my blood. This is profound.β€πππ₯I Loved it
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Thankyou so much. I adore your kind words. You made my day. Glad you liked it πβπΈ
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Keep that same energy!
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Hahha I try my best to π
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Christ promises all who believe in Him eternal life. β€
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I respect your faith dear. For me to live a eternal life is to live in the hearts of people who I served. Good day dear π
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Youβve taken on a worthwhile subject for sure. I thought about writing a song about mortality that would sound a lot like this.
I hate talking about death but it always reminds us how small we really are.
Thanks for sharing.
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Wow what a coincidence. Thankyou so much for taking time to read my work and dropping by to say few words. I totally appreciate it.
Yes me too hate the thought or talk on death. I have written it to overcome my fear of death. Yes life is small after all.
The pleasure is all mine. Good dayβ.
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Well written. I hope this is a work of fiction
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Thankyou so much. Well it’s a bit of both worlds. Appreciate your keen observations πΈβ
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I do hope things works out for you dear. Stay blessed
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Hopefully they will. Thankyou for your kind concern. Good day β
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Your words are powerful! Scary talking about death but I think itβs necessary. I think we need to have more conversations and writings on death & mortality π
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Thankyou so much dear. Yes death is a scary topic. I wrote it out to finally get over my fear of it. Yes I completely agree with you. Thankyou so much for your kind words πβπΈ
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Muitos homens sofrem com tamanho de seus pΓͺnis. https://Www.instapaper.com/p/durhamploug57
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Avalie vocΓͺ comentando, mas seu tΓ³pico nΓ£o realizado
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Wonderful post! This has really made me think a lot!!!
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Thankyou so much for dropping by. Glad to helpπ
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So it’s not just me that’s comfortable speaking on the subject. You’ve dug really deep with this one.
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Well all of us are not comfortable talking about death. Thx for your kind words and taking time to read my work βπΈ
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Great post! No one ever wants to talk about death but itβs inevitable
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Thankyou so much. Means a lot βΊοΈ
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