Her first day at school and her first day after marriage were the same
She was surrounded in a room full of strangers
Bridged in the dilemma of thoughts
People everywhere but not a sole to speak to
The awkward smiles and hello’s
Sharing the formality greetings to sharing secrets
A little sunshine and storm’s weakness captive in one’s sole
A line that met it’s parallel universe
Far from the figment of complexity
How strangers became a part of her family is the story behind this poem
© G.V Raghavasree
Desert flower 
What an astonishingly true remark! The first day of school and the first day of marriage !
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Thankyou. Hahha yeah it’s very similar when you think about it.😊
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Yes ! When you do it… I never did it before I read you 😀
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Haha always happy to help you see the other side of the bridge. Good day 😊
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😀 Thank you ! To you too 🙂
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Any interesting perspective on the similarities bwtween the first day at school and the first day of marriage.
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Any interesting perspective on the similarities bwtween the first day at school and the first day of marriage.
I am not married yet but I can relate to the new beginnings.
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Thankyou so much for taking time to come and read my work. Means a lot. Hahah well now you know. Good day ✌🌸
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This is beautiful! And so true actually!
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Thankyou so much for dropping by.🌸✌
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Wow! a new point of view 🙂
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Thankyou dear😊🌸
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You’re welcome 😊
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Woww so so beautifully observed …I love your writings 🌼❤😊 …Well done poetess 🌼
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Hahhaha thankyou Mr Observant. 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸😊
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Wow☺️… Wonderful piece
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thankyou 🙂
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Anytime 😀
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“People everywhere but not a sole to speak to”…Yeah, great line. This is what I experience daily. I always wonder where everyone’s going, what is everyone doing, but there’s never anyone to talk to….they are all inside their own little reality bubbles.
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Thankyou so much for dropping your thoughts. I get you George. We are all in of thoughts of bubble. No one wants to burst . I am sorry that you feel this way. Maybe you can write about these thoughts maybe. Good day ✌🌸
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I will. Thanks.
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The pleasure is all mine 😊
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Wow. This is a reality for so many people around me. You got the best words to describe the feeling…
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Appreciate your kind words dear. Well I try my best to make it worth your read. Keep posted 🌸😊💞
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Loved the comparison in this ❤️ well done!!
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Thankyou so much dear 😊✌
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You’re welcome!
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Loving it, dessertflower. ❤️❤️And the comparison Indeed. “First day of school and first day of marriage”! I don’t know how it feels to be married yet, but I can imagine the frightening thoughts of it!
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Thankyou so much Jojo. Means a lot. Hahha well it’s the thought that counts. Have a great day
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Always my pleasure, dessertflower ☺️ you have a great day as well❤️
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Oh wow, this is a lovely poem, thank you for sharing 😊
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Thankyou dear for your kind words 😇🌸
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You depicted it so well and love the analogy
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Thankyou so much Shantanu for the constant support. Means a lot
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My absolute pleasure.
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So profoundly true and deeply philosophical… your writings are an intricate part of who you are and how you define the world around you. An exceptional piece!
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Appreciate your kind words of encouragement as always. Hahah you got the view of my blogs. Seriously means a lot coming from a regular reader. Good day to you ✌😊
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It is a most wonderful pleasure… I thoroughly enjoy reading your exceptional posts! Blessings.
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Awww you just made my day. Hope you have a wonderful day ahead
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Have a marvelous Sunday… thank you so very much!
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Most heart touching poem and most lovely.
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Thankyou so much Aruna😊
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Most welcome,dear!🌷
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I love the comparison you make here. It’s true, so true. 🔆🦋
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Thankyou so much. 😊
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Thankyou. Would check out ur blog
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All the friends I made in school are still with me to this day. We’re brothers now
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Wow nice man. It’s hard to find people in the generation of the fast life to keep in touch. You are a lucky man. ✌
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I am indeed!
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Yes pal. I am jeleous ✌
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Beautifully penned
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thankyou so much.
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Surprisingly so true..and it touched 😊I must say the comparison is brilliant and realistic..I have come across many WordPress poetry pages and what makes you special is that, with minimal words you could open a larger sky in readers minds..which demands keen observation on the outside world and a creative mind,which you already owns..keep up the good work friend..
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Keep going girl never let it down…😊😊✍️
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Wonderful and so precise❤️
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