Finesse

In religion it is called the spirit

In science we call it the energy

In feelings it is know as emotions

In streets we call it called a vibe

Trust these gut feelings

Stay alert and stop guarding the unknown thoughts

As these are the only things that are going to keep you alive in this god forbid Earth

Away from the winds of insanity drowing us

Hang in there

It’s not a option but a command of the living that died inside

Gave up on hope, dreams, family,friends….and what not

In the symphony of my cries lives a little tragedy

With grace I move to another day

Like a hot air baloon

Up and away into the unknown orbit of life.

Β©G.V Raghavasree

34 Comments Add yours

  1. George F. says:

    Great poem! Thanks for sharing. I love the progression…spirit, energy, emotions, vibe.

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou so much George for the constant support as always πŸ’žπŸ˜ŠπŸŒΈ

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      1. George F. says:

        You give me goosebumps.

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        1. dessertflower5 says:

          Hahah that’s the moto. Glad to hear it from you palπŸ˜‰

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  2. Loved this! 😍

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou so much ☺️

      Like

    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou ☺️

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  3. Era says:

    Good one 😊

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou so much ☺️

      Like

      1. Era says:

        Anytime πŸ˜‘πŸ˜Š

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        1. Era says:

          😊😊**

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        2. dessertflower5 says:

          🌸

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  4. Navin says:

    Lovely poem….the connections & the interconnections…well written, Raghavasree

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou so much Navin for dropping by. Glad to see you noticed it☺️

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Navin says:

        You’re very welcome ✨ 😊

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        1. dessertflower5 says:

          πŸ™‚πŸŒΈ

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  5. judeitakali says:

    Love the depth in this, suitable for these troubled times

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou so much Jude. Truly means a lot 😊🌸

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  6. Nimish says:

    Absolutely love this πŸ˜€πŸ˜πŸŒΌβ€

    U r amazing boss…. Half poet half doctor ✌🌼

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Hahahh thankyou so much. Deeply appreciate your time reading this.

      Haha I am πŸ˜‰πŸŒΈ

      Like

  7. Joel Abakah says:

    Sometimes it’s the unknown thoughts and the uncertainty they carry that make life worth the risks. Thought in deep thought they really are certain. Leading us into encounters of many capabilities and life lessons.

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Some true and wise words as always my dear friend Joel. Couldn’t agree more. Thankyou for dropping by. Your comments mean a lot

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      1. Joel Abakah says:

        You’re too kindπŸ’š

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  8. Olivia Ava says:

    So beautiful poem🧑. I enjoyed reading it.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou so much. Glad you enjoyed reading this 😊

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  9. Veena says:

    Very beautiful thoughts and expression . I really liked it . Thanks

    Liked by 1 person

    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou so much. Glad that you did😊

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  10. krish says:

    Beautiful expression…life goes on …πŸ™πŸ™

    Liked by 1 person

    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou so much Krish. Yes life has to go on
      πŸ™‚

      Like

  11. This is beautiful, heartwarming and so well written. I love the image of an “unknown orbit of life.” ❀️

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Appreciate your kind words. Glad that you like it πŸ˜‡

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  12. Magnificent work πŸ‘ πŸ‘Œ

    Like

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