In religion it is called the spirit
In science we call it the energy
In feelings it is know as emotions
In streets we call it called a vibe
Trust these gut feelings
Stay alert and stop guarding the unknown thoughts
As these are the only things that are going to keep you alive in this god forbid Earth
Away from the winds of insanity drowing us
Hang in there
It’s not a option but a command of the living that died inside
Gave up on hope, dreams, family,friends….and what not
In the symphony of my cries lives a little tragedy
With grace I move to another day
Like a hot air baloon
Up and away into the unknown orbit of life.
Β©G.V Raghavasree
Great poem! Thanks for sharing. I love the progression…spirit, energy, emotions, vibe.
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Thankyou so much George for the constant support as always πππΈ
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You give me goosebumps.
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Hahah that’s the moto. Glad to hear it from you palπ
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Loved this! π
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Thankyou so much βΊοΈ
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nice poem!!!
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Thankyou βΊοΈ
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Good one π
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Thankyou so much βΊοΈ
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Anytime ππ
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Lovely poem….the connections & the interconnections…well written, Raghavasree
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Thankyou so much Navin for dropping by. Glad to see you noticed itβΊοΈ
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You’re very welcome β¨ π
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Love the depth in this, suitable for these troubled times
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Thankyou so much Jude. Truly means a lot ππΈ
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Absolutely love this πππΌβ€
U r amazing boss…. Half poet half doctor βπΌ
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Hahahh thankyou so much. Deeply appreciate your time reading this.
Haha I am ππΈ
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Sometimes it’s the unknown thoughts and the uncertainty they carry that make life worth the risks. Thought in deep thought they really are certain. Leading us into encounters of many capabilities and life lessons.
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Though in*
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Some true and wise words as always my dear friend Joel. Couldn’t agree more. Thankyou for dropping by. Your comments mean a lot
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You’re too kindπ
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So beautiful poemπ§‘. I enjoyed reading it.
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Thankyou so much. Glad you enjoyed reading this π
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Very beautiful thoughts and expression . I really liked it . Thanks
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Thankyou so much. Glad that you didπ
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Beautiful expression…life goes on …ππ
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Thankyou so much Krish. Yes life has to go on
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This is beautiful, heartwarming and so well written. I love the image of an “unknown orbit of life.” β€οΈ
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Appreciate your kind words. Glad that you like it π
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Magnificent work π π
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That is beautiful. I see a lot of myself in this one π.
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Thank you so muchπ
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Yes I am. Raghavasree Gopu is my Idπ
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Iβd like to be friends, is that okay with you?
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Yes sure. I would love to be friendsπ
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Sure I will try. No worriesπ
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Sure I will try. No worries.π
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Iβm in! Thank you! β€οΈ
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Thank you to you tooπ
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Thankyou so much
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