Sorry for not responding no more
She don’t care about anything
Reached a dangerous saturation point
A sole that decayed inside
Being every one’s rock
She forgot to be her own
With a smile she greeted her troubles
Lent a ear to the needed
Became a voice of the unheard
She was a ray of rainbow everyone craved to be
But something has changed
She stopped smiling
The monotonous reality
Drained her off her radiance
She sees the glass half empty than full
Just like her delusional existence
Present but meaningless
In a vacuum of thoughts
That sucked her dreams along
Inner freedom of imprisonment
Is a storm that is brewing
A lie to many achievements
A week being
Stuck in a rat race
Prey to incomplete conversations
Broken silence finally felt like home
When she needed her closest the most
She locked herself from the world
Hid the truth that she was in stage 2 cancer
The sad part was the no one never noticed
She looked inhuman
Her hair started falling out
So did her strength to fight death
But with hope she took her every breath
She drifted along
Just like clouds
Never stopping
Only to return as a storm
Capturing everyone’s tears at her funeral
She finally mastered the art of balance
Between holding on and letting go.
She won this race of life
To becoming a person worth remembering
And to be looked up to
The sarcastic life looked upon her broken soul
Bid her farewell to a eternity of peace
As it was all that she deserved ..
© G.V Raghavasree
Usually I don’t like anything ending with a sad note..but sometimes it’s the truth..as this poem ..💙
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Yes dear sad ending are hard to accept but we can’t change the truth. Thank you so much for dropping by. 😊
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Very nicely penned dear…❤️
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Honest and true.. the pain of being an unprotected empath!
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Yes you found the heart of this poem. Thankyou so much for taking time to read this. 😊
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My real pleasure 🦋
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yes, this, exactly! INFJ.
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Thankyou wo much. Means a lot😊
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its a beautiful poem, awesome!!!
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Thankyou so much Deepak. Means a lot😊
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hey, my pleasure!!!
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😊
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
HITS THE HARDEST IN THE HEART….AND SOUL!
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Thankyou Jonathan. Your immense support means a ton.
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GOOD STUFF NEEDS GOOD SUPPORT! 😀
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😇😇
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Sometimes, it takes something life-threatening like cancer for us to realize, we need to shift the focus back to our selves, and so, we begin, putting our selves as our own, top priority, instead of always putting others, first…
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Exactly on point dear. You hit the jackpot as always in bringing out the true meaning. Thankyou so much:)
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This was painful to read – in a good way. Very well done.
BTW – I think you meant “soul” not “sole” (but I could be wrong!)
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Thankyou so much Ben as always. Your presence means a lot,
p.s- Yes it was was supposed to be soul. HAHAH i guess I have to be more careful with your eye for detail. Thankyou once again
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Oh wow, this is so well written, kind of sad though that sometimes the most generous people forget about their own well being.
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Thank you so much Kellie.😊
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This is so beautifully written….and very much relatable….sometimes it takes a big hit to shake….to awaken the “sleeping” soul….I’m living it as well….the highs & the lows….I’m loving to live from a different place….some parts are senseless….though I’ve got my senses back….keep writing such amazing pieces….keep painting from the depths, Raghavasree
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Thank you so much Navin. Your words mean a lot. I can see you connected with this poem Appreciate you taking time to read this
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You’re very welcome, Raghavasree. Thanks for your sharing.
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Writing and sharing is only worth the effort with support like yours my friend🙂
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True….we’re here to support each other….which is amazing…. although you’re too kind
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Yes true. HAHAH reversing the complement I see. Good day pal
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You too have a good day! ✨
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This is sad💔
Sometimes people with an illness like cancer want to be treated like everyone else without the disease being their centre of focus. So some choose to channel their happiness towards making others happy, just so they don’t think of their condition as often. Others prefer to look after themselves and isolate from the world thinking their disease is all the world will see. It’s really the balance between self love and exhibiting that same energy towards others that can make it all worthwhile.
It’s sad the character in this poem leaned far on just one side. Lovely poem G!💚
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Thank you so much for dropping by. Yes you hit the heart of the poem.
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💔
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Lovelyyy piece🤍
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Thankyou so much. Means a lot😊
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My pleasure reading 🥰
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🙂
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Wow this was really heartbreaking.
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Thanks. Glad you can relate to the emotions
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My pleasure.
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🙂
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Now I miss my girlfriend and I don’t even have one.
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AWWW to bad. I thought you were married to your sadism… Can’t believe you want to cheat on it….HHAHAHAH
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Stranger things have happened
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HHAHAHAHAH I bet for that saddism creativity it has to come from a stranger place
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Your Stigma has a deep meaning with a ability to touch hearts
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Aww thank you so much. Your comment means a lot😊
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Its my pleasure.
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☺
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Next time I have to warn my eyes before reading your poems
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Hahah I am sorry. Thanks for taking time to read it though😊
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🤣😂😂
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Beautiful piece that stirs emotions! Thank you for posting! 🙂
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Thank you so much. Glad that you can connect to it😊
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You’re so welcome. 🙂
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😊
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Profound piece full of emotions 👍🏻👍🏻💕
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Thank you so much 😊
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I love this ❤️
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Glad you liked it
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👏🏽
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🙂
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Such powerful emotions captured so well!
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My deep gratitude. Appreciate you taking time to read my work.
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Swapping the side of coin; we’re still unaware of the date, when we’ll go back to stars…
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Haha quite true indeed. We don’t know when our time is
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