Ocean

Let the light house path your way

so that you can be bewildered by her sent of magic

every time you look into her eyes

you will be tempted to fall deeper and deeper into her dangerous waters

She is a turbulent wave on the surface

crashing with anger and frustration

scaring away her enemies

Crushing everything against her path

A siren she is

A devil with her play

A pretty little rose with a sharp tongue

More than capable to break others bones

Once you had a taste of her

will leave you begging for more

In order to be with her

you must be a lost sole like herself

as her idea of love too much for this world

Underneath all those ragged missing edges

is a just girl that gave up to the cruel world

Hid her emotions as they only betrayed her

She will forever remain a ocean

waiting for the sun rays to touch her lips

Redeem her from pestering thoughts

To hold the spaces between her fingers

She will forever remain empty as the ocean

With secrets and mysteries

Just waiting to be found

©G.V Raghavasree

Hope you enjoyed reading this poem as much I loved writing it. Let me know your thoughts 😊

Good day😊

48 Comments Add yours

    1. Thankyou so much😇

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  1. Navin says:

    This is simply beautiful & raw….loving the lines & depths….

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    1. Thankyou so much Navin. Glad you liked it. Means a lot😊

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      1. Navin says:

        You’re very welcome, Raghavasree 😊✨

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  2. Who in the universe will not dare for such adventure…

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    1. Hahahha there is more to what that meets the eye my friend… Thankyou for taking time to read it😊

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      1. Humans who look inner beauty are jewel…

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  3. carriepankratz says:

    Beautiful!

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    1. Thankyou so much😇

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  4. Binisonu says:

    Beautiful and heart touching

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    1. Thankyou so much😇

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  5. Alyssa says:

    I am obsessed with the depth in your poetry.

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    1. Thanks so much. Really means a lot that you connected with it.. Good day😊

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  6. Elle says:

    Love your poem! I’ve always been fond of the ocean. 🥰🌻

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    1. My Graditudes. Hahah me too I love the ocean. Good day😊

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  7. jemazingtravels says:

    As empty as the ocean full of secrets and mysteries that’s a pretty deep line .. I guess it could have many interpretations but that was really good .. I thought I was reading a excerpt from a book until I got to the end keep it up!

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    1. You found my favorite line. Aww thankyou so much.. Your comment means a lot. It made my day😊

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  8. wrong says:

    The lighthouse is misdirecting those stranger yachts.can you see that!

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    1. Hahah it certainly is. Thanks for taking time to read it😊

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  9. Jeff Flesch says:

    Absolutely beautiful.❤️

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    1. Thankyou Jeff. 😇

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      1. Jeff Flesch says:

        You’re very welcome, my pleasure.🙏

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  10. Secrets says:

    Oh, the depth of this. Those last two lines just take the whole piece to another level. Loved it!

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    1. My deepest gratitude’s. Good day:)

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  11. Megala says:

    Beautiful poem! It is as deep as the ocean, just can not be explored at a glance. 🙂

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    1. Thankyou so much. Glad you liked it:)

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  12. Beautiful poem. Loved the oxymoron ‘”empty ocean full of secrets’… 🙂

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    1. Thank you so much. Glad that you liked it😊

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  13. katelon says:

    I enjoyed the imagery in this poem.

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    1. Thank you so much😊

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  14. Absolutely beautiful!

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  15. AnuRijo says:

    Yes ‘She’ and your poetry is So deep to dive in as an ocean 🌊..mysteries and secrets ❤️
    Amazing ❤️
    Anu@lafemina❤️

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    1. Awww thankyou dear. Means a lot. Have a lovely day:)

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      1. AnuRijo says:

        You too..🙂

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  16. judeitakali says:

    Beautiful writing

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    1. Thankyou so much Jude

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      1. judeitakali says:

        My deep pleasure

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  17. Omg this is so lovellyyy🧡❤

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    1. Glad you like it:)

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      1. I indeed loved it..!🥰

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