Let the light house path your way
so that you can be bewildered by her sent of magic
every time you look into her eyes
you will be tempted to fall deeper and deeper into her dangerous waters
She is a turbulent wave on the surface
crashing with anger and frustration
scaring away her enemies
Crushing everything against her path
A siren she is
A devil with her play
A pretty little rose with a sharp tongue
More than capable to break others bones
Once you had a taste of her
will leave you begging for more
In order to be with her
you must be a lost sole like herself
as her idea of love too much for this world
Underneath all those ragged missing edges
is a just girl that gave up to the cruel world
Hid her emotions as they only betrayed her
She will forever remain a ocean
waiting for the sun rays to touch her lips
Redeem her from pestering thoughts
To hold the spaces between her fingers
She will forever remain empty as the ocean
With secrets and mysteries
Just waiting to be found
©G.V Raghavasree
Hope you enjoyed reading this poem as much I loved writing it. Let me know your thoughts 😊
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Beautiful
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Thankyou so much😇
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This is simply beautiful & raw….loving the lines & depths….
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Thankyou so much Navin. Glad you liked it. Means a lot😊
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You’re very welcome, Raghavasree 😊✨
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Who in the universe will not dare for such adventure…
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Hahahha there is more to what that meets the eye my friend… Thankyou for taking time to read it😊
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Humans who look inner beauty are jewel…
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Beautiful!
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Thankyou so much😇
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Beautiful and heart touching
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Thankyou so much😇
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I am obsessed with the depth in your poetry.
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Thanks so much. Really means a lot that you connected with it.. Good day😊
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Love your poem! I’ve always been fond of the ocean. 🥰🌻
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My Graditudes. Hahah me too I love the ocean. Good day😊
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As empty as the ocean full of secrets and mysteries that’s a pretty deep line .. I guess it could have many interpretations but that was really good .. I thought I was reading a excerpt from a book until I got to the end keep it up!
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You found my favorite line. Aww thankyou so much.. Your comment means a lot. It made my day😊
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The lighthouse is misdirecting those stranger yachts.can you see that!
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Hahah it certainly is. Thanks for taking time to read it😊
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Absolutely beautiful.❤️
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Thankyou Jeff. 😇
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You’re very welcome, my pleasure.🙏
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Oh, the depth of this. Those last two lines just take the whole piece to another level. Loved it!
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My deepest gratitude’s. Good day:)
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Beautiful poem! It is as deep as the ocean, just can not be explored at a glance. 🙂
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Thankyou so much. Glad you liked it:)
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Beautiful poem. Loved the oxymoron ‘”empty ocean full of secrets’… 🙂
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Thank you so much. Glad that you liked it😊
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I enjoyed the imagery in this poem.
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Thank you so much😊
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Absolutely beautiful!
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Thank you😊
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Yes ‘She’ and your poetry is So deep to dive in as an ocean 🌊..mysteries and secrets ❤️
Amazing ❤️
Anu@lafemina❤️
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Awww thankyou dear. Means a lot. Have a lovely day:)
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You too..🙂
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Beautiful writing
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Thankyou so much Jude
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My deep pleasure
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🙂
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Omg this is so lovellyyy🧡❤
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Glad you like it:)
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I indeed loved it..!🥰
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