Déja Vu

Her first day at school and her first day after marriage were the same

She was surrounded in a room full of strangers

Bridged in the dilemma of thoughts

People everywhere but not a sole to speak to

The awkward smiles and hello’s

Sharing the formality greetings to sharing secrets

A little sunshine and storm’s weakness captive in one’s sole

A line that met it’s parallel universe

Far from the figment of complexity

How strangers became a part of her family is the story behind this poem

© G.V Raghavasree

93 Comments Add yours

  1. What an astonishingly true remark! The first day of school and the first day of marriage !

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou. Hahha yeah it’s very similar when you think about it.😊

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      1. Yes ! When you do it… I never did it before I read you 😀

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        1. dessertflower5 says:

          Haha always happy to help you see the other side of the bridge. Good day 😊

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          1. 😀 Thank you ! To you too 🙂

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            1. dessertflower5 says:

              😊

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      2. Any interesting perspective on the similarities bwtween the first day at school and the first day of marriage.

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    2. Any interesting perspective on the similarities bwtween the first day at school and the first day of marriage.
      I am not married yet but I can relate to the new beginnings.

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      1. dessertflower5 says:

        Thankyou so much for taking time to come and read my work. Means a lot. Hahah well now you know. Good day ✌🌸

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  2. Tisha says:

    This is beautiful! And so true actually!

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou so much for dropping by.🌸✌

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  3. Wow! a new point of view 🙂

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou dear😊🌸

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      1. You’re welcome 😊

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        1. dessertflower5 says:

          😊

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  4. Nimish says:

    Woww so so beautifully observed …I love your writings 🌼❤😊 …Well done poetess 🌼

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Hahhaha thankyou Mr Observant. 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸😊

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  5. Wow☺️… Wonderful piece

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      thankyou 🙂

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  6. George F. says:

    “People everywhere but not a sole to speak to”…Yeah, great line. This is what I experience daily. I always wonder where everyone’s going, what is everyone doing, but there’s never anyone to talk to….they are all inside their own little reality bubbles.

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou so much for dropping your thoughts. I get you George. We are all in of thoughts of bubble. No one wants to burst . I am sorry that you feel this way. Maybe you can write about these thoughts maybe. Good day ✌🌸

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      1. George F. says:

        I will. Thanks.

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        1. dessertflower5 says:

          The pleasure is all mine 😊

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  7. Rageshree says:

    Wow. This is a reality for so many people around me. You got the best words to describe the feeling…

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Appreciate your kind words dear. Well I try my best to make it worth your read. Keep posted 🌸😊💞

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  8. Loved the comparison in this ❤️ well done!!

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou so much dear 😊✌

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      1. You’re welcome!

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        1. dessertflower5 says:

          😊

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  9. Loving it, dessertflower. ❤️❤️And the comparison Indeed. “First day of school and first day of marriage”! I don’t know how it feels to be married yet, but I can imagine the frightening thoughts of it!

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou so much Jojo. Means a lot. Hahha well it’s the thought that counts. Have a great day

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  10. Always my pleasure, dessertflower ☺️ you have a great day as well❤️

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      😊

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  11. Kellie says:

    Oh wow, this is a lovely poem, thank you for sharing 😊

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou dear for your kind words 😇🌸

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  12. You depicted it so well and love the analogy

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou so much Shantanu for the constant support. Means a lot

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      1. My absolute pleasure.

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        1. dessertflower5 says:

          😊🌸

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  13. So profoundly true and deeply philosophical… your writings are an intricate part of who you are and how you define the world around you. An exceptional piece!

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Appreciate your kind words of encouragement as always. Hahah you got the view of my blogs. Seriously means a lot coming from a regular reader. Good day to you ✌😊

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      1. It is a most wonderful pleasure… I thoroughly enjoy reading your exceptional posts! Blessings.

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        1. dessertflower5 says:

          Awww you just made my day. Hope you have a wonderful day ahead

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          1. Have a marvelous Sunday… thank you so very much!

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  14. aruna3 says:

    Most heart touching poem and most lovely.

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou so much Aruna😊

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      1. aruna3 says:

        Most welcome,dear!🌷

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  15. I love the comparison you make here. It’s true, so true. 🔆🦋

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou so much. 😊

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou. Would check out ur blog

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  17. Gottfried says:

    All the friends I made in school are still with me to this day. We’re brothers now

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Wow nice man. It’s hard to find people in the generation of the fast life to keep in touch. You are a lucky man. ✌

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      1. Gottfried says:

        I am indeed!

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        1. dessertflower5 says:

          Yes pal. I am jeleous ✌

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  18. Saniya says:

    Beautifully penned

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      thankyou so much.

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou so much. I needed this today. I was thinking of giving up writing and blogs. And your comment just made my day. When you least expect it the world sends a message to guide you. Thankyou so much. Have a wonderful day💞🌸🙂✌

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      1. AnuRijo says:

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        1. dessertflower5 says:

          Thankyou so much once again. I will never let it down. 🌸🌸🌸💞

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  21. dessertflower5 says:

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  22. Wonderful and so precise❤️

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou for your comment. 🙂

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  24. Rishika says:

    Beautiful piece!

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

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      1. swamiyesudas says:

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        1. dessertflower5 says:

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  37. Angel Like says:

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    1. dessertflower5 says:

      Thankyou so much

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      1. Angel Like says:

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